The creation of Sonny cave island!!
Back in the 60’s there was a mayor of a small town in Florida called Jefferson. His name was
Sony Ericsson . He really liked surfing. He was so skilled because he lived in a beach hut on a famous surf-break beach called Oraki.
One day he decided to go surfing in Hawaii.
He zoomed across the calm ocean on his boat, the Makarell. When he got to Jaws, Hawaii,he hired a rental surfboard and headed out.
He saw a fat guy flying across little waves in a ducktube. He decided to talk to him. He lay down on his board and sighed. “Hi,” Sonny murmured to the fat guy. “Oh hi,didn’t see you there,” the fat guy replied. “My name is Rashy” Then he got smashed into some rocks. He woke up and saw nothing but rocks.
He realized he was in a cave. He looked out at the clear, blue water. WAIT!!! Water! He couldn’t see land for even 3000 miles. He went deeper into the cave and saw some building supplies. He looked startled. He decided to go for a swim. He dived off the rocky platform, and into the blue deep water. He dived down, down and down. He was hesitating so much that he didn’t realize he had been underwater for 10 minutes and was about to drown.
Suddenly a shark came out of nowhere and tried to eat him,but he got out too quick. He lay on the platform and lost consciousness..
He woke up at 2:00 am in the morning and climbed up on some rocks to the top of the cave. He sat there. Day and night. On day four on the island, sonny felt like he wanted to commit suicide.
Then he remembered the building supplies.
He went to the back of the cave and grabbed the supplies. He knew he wouldn't be able to get home again. The building supplies included an oven, plant pots and an old 1958 block tv. He built his own little island shack. He called it Sonny Cave island.
He lived there until he died in 2013. Now it is a tourist attraction . Lots of people around the world come to see it.
The end!!!
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Casper. My name is Jayden. I’m a year 8 student at Paihia School in Te Ngahere. I like about your creation of Sonny Cave Island that was a long post about the Sonny cave island and I liked how you detailed about the 60’s. You taught me about Sony Ericsson was so skilled because he lived in a beach hut on a famous surf-break beach called Oraki.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever been in Hawaii before?