Show, Don’t Tell
Deconstructed Recount
WRITE ABOUT IT | DRAW A PICTURE |
SEE Sand dunes towering over me as I rode along into the misty distance. Waves crashing into the shore. | |
HEAR I heard the rumble of the rusty engine as I rode along, the sound making my ears ring.
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TASTE I tasted salt as I bit into a salty delicious chip, LP sliding down my throat after taking a big sip. |
WRITE ABOUT IT | DRAW A PICTURE |
SMELL delicious chips and a hotdog on a stick, the smell is unbearably good | |
FEEL feel cold as I dove into the frigid water and I feel intermediate coldness. |
