WALT Write a Deconstructed Recount.
So for the last week, we have been learning how to write a deconstructed holiday recount. We had to write what we saw, smelt, tasted, heard, and felt.
Reflection I found it easy to think of things I did in the holidays. I found it hard to find words to fit in. Next time I will find better topics to talk about.
Kia ora Casper, I really liked your deconstructed recount and the way you described your holiday. Maybe next time you could work on using Show, Don't tell and add more detail to your paragraphs. Keep up the good effort! Blog ya later, Ms Peters.
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ReplyDeleteHey there Casper, Samantha here. I really liked your writing about your deconstructed holiday recount. I loved how you made it feel like the reader was actually in the writing. Maybe next time you could add how you felt while riding and writing this. Keep up the amazing work!
ReplyDeleteHey there Samantha, Casper here. Thank you for the amazing comment for my deconstructed recount blog post.I really like the way you described it. Anyway keep up the good blog comments and blog ya later.
DeleteCasper that sound's fun my name is Joshua i am a year 8
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ReplyDeleteHi Casper, it's Alice here. I like how descriptive your writing is. Maybe next time you could get do more writing. Blog you later!!
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