Refugees

WALT Find Infomation About Refugees For the last 2 weeks me and my buddy Tait have been reading lots of information and books about refugees to get to know how much they struggle in life. Reflection it was easy to get infomation from the book. It was hard to get lots of infomation. next time I will work faster.

Deconstructed Recount

 WALT Write a Deconstructed Recount.

So for the last week, we have been learning how to write a deconstructed holiday recount. We had to write what we saw, smelt, tasted, heard, and felt.

Reflection I found it easy to think of things I did in the holidays. I found it hard to find words to fit in. Next time I will find better topics to talk about.

Deconstructed Recount

                                   Show, Don’t Tell 

Deconstructed Recount 

WRITE ABOUT IT	DRAW A PICTURE
SEE  Sand dunes towering over me as I rode along into the misty distance.   Waves crashing into the shore.
HEAR  I heard the rumble of the rusty engine as I rode along, the sound making my ears ring.
TASTE  I tasted salt as I bit into a salty delicious chip, LP sliding down my throat after taking a big sip.

WRITE ABOUT IT	DRAW A PICTURE
SMELL   delicious chips and a hotdog on a stick, the smell is unbearably good
FEEL feel cold as I dove into the frigid water and I feel intermediate coldness.

MY MEDIA AUDIT

with whaea deb, we were talking about social media and socializing apps. we had to think of what media's we had used in twenty-four hours. here are the things I used and listened to.

 it was easy to put in pictures

it was hard to think of things I did in twenty-four hours

next time I should put more media and socializing apps.

Build a blog comment.

We were learning about...how to build a blog comment.

I found it easy to... choose it quickly.

I found it hard to... drag it to the fridge.

next time I need to...to nothing.

the creation of Sonny cave island!!!

 The creation of Sonny cave island!!

Back in the 60’s there was a mayor of a small town in Florida called Jefferson. His name was 

Sony Ericsson . He really liked surfing. He was so skilled because he lived in a beach hut on a famous surf-break beach called Oraki.

One day he decided to go surfing in Hawaii. 

He zoomed across the calm ocean on his boat, the Makarell. When he got to Jaws, Hawaii,he hired a rental surfboard and headed out.

He saw a fat guy flying across little waves in a ducktube. He decided to talk to him. He lay down on his board and sighed. “Hi,” Sonny murmured to the fat guy. “Oh hi,didn’t see you there,” the fat guy replied.  “My name is Rashy”  Then he got smashed into some rocks. He woke up and saw nothing but rocks.

 He realized he was in a cave. He looked out at the clear, blue water. WAIT!!! Water! He couldn’t see land for even 3000 miles. He went deeper into the cave and saw some building supplies. He looked startled. He decided to go for a swim. He dived off the rocky platform, and into the blue deep water. He dived down,  down and down. He was hesitating so much that he didn’t realize he had been underwater for 10 minutes and was about to drown. 

Suddenly a shark came out of nowhere and tried to eat him,but he got out too quick. He lay on the platform and lost consciousness..

He woke up at 2:00 am in the morning and climbed up on some rocks to the top of the cave. He sat there. Day and night. On day four on the island, sonny felt like he wanted to commit suicide. 

Then he remembered the building supplies.

He went to the back of the cave and grabbed the supplies. He knew  he wouldn't be able to get home again. The building supplies included an oven, plant pots and an old 1958 block tv. He built his own little island shack.  He called it Sonny Cave island. 

He lived there until he died in 2013. Now it is a tourist attraction . Lots of people around the world come to see it.

The end!!!

CM sort the comments.

With Whaea Deb she set up a bunch of random comments and we had to give them a thumbs up or thumbs down. Then we had to say why they were bad or good.